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The Circle of Suicide

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It's morning.
I sit in my room
Leaning out of my window,
Taking drag after drag
of a Camel Crush.
I smoke a cigarette
as my computer plays the same
melancholic music I listen to
so I know
that there are others
with the same problems
as me.
Who else wants to join
my Circle of Pain?
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02.08.2013
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i hope you don't feel this way now...if so there's nothing more selfish in my eyes than the one who commits suicide. It never solves problems and it only ever adds to the pain even to those you may not realize even care. I read in Bloomberg about a guy who looked a lot like my friend...i wasn't going to read but i noticed he was in the obituary section. I was crying because he had such a brilliant mind and a huge impact on technology and the internet as we know it and yet he committed suicide at such a young age not too long ago. I never met him, never knew anything about him, but wished I did- I wondered how such a bright and cute guy could end his life like that and thought if he did it and he had accomplished something in his lifetime haven't I got more reason to forfeit mine since i'm stuck at square one: getting a life? I was on the brink but I fought it out. Had I not people would have wondered why and would've broken many in my life and been the cause of someone else dying I know it- I wouldn't have been able to help the situation or meet my new best friend. I would have just been dead without no real reason.

You just never know how time will affect you or others or your situation in life.

Anywho, this had great imagery and obviously got to me tonight so it has done it's job in creating emotions in others :) Thanks for adding this to #SayItHere.